Revolutsia's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Snip]

The detail that went into the scissors is amazing, and the fact that this is actually PAINTED just reinforces the work that went into this, I feel like the flower itself could use some more to it, the flower needs maybe some dynamic lighting to it, and same with the scissors, preferably highlights to emphasize the metal.
This is a very, very good pic other wise.

Oink-Moo responds:

I agree that the flower is in need of some dynamic light and contrast; I wanted to make it "whiter," sort of illuminated with just hints of color to give it essence and dimension, but I'm still relatively new to painting and I couldn't manage the dynamic lighting we both are in need of here. I've failed us BOTH, BLAGH! Lol.

I also didn't want the scissors to look TOO shiny because I wanted them to look sort of "antiqued" or rustic, like they were beautiful but not quite new. There are many things that can be better about them anyway though. Thanks a lot for the critique, I very much appreciate it. :)

[Everything happens for..]

This is making me giggle right now, the scratchy-ness of the font looks real nice, almost similarily to "Don't Starve" and the raisin is just simply wonderful.

[Come Home]

I like the whole composition to this piece, especially the posing, however the footing seems a tiny bit off, the white flooring could have to do with that, but I love the back ground an what you did with the wires.
Its an excellent piece, its also great to see you submiting art now.

[Poison creature - Carcinogenic]

The overall design of this was ingenious! The smooth clean borders of the creature were executed flawlessly! Great coloring choices here especially on the smog! And the position... Oh my. Designs like this don't just happen every day! Well for me anyway. Amazing job with the poison creatures btw.

[Commission: COLONEL MAGUS]

The contrast that you can pack into skin is very nicely done, I just noticed that.
The hand saw thing, looked very flat to me, but however!
The clothing rippled very nicely and looked very proportioned too! Including the not so normal position this was drawn in, requires a lot of detail for it not to look, let's say, FUCKED UP.
Clothing on this was very well done!
Overall very well done!

[DaTCTF]

Great job with the overall design!
The face and over sized forehead really got me!
Especially the nose, brow, and beard.
If you could finish it up and maybe touch up a few patterns in the back, and then jam pack it with color and more patterns, this could end up being a perfect (9.9999999..../10) piece.
Great job

ZLEAP responds:

It's getting close to done but I find it hard to draw these days. The music sort of sucks up most of my inspiration. That and I've taken up painting again. I never did figure out what I want to be when I grow up.