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The sampled voices... Felt too... Repetitive? I think that ruined it for me...
The sample just ruined it in my opinion... Not the subject, just how outed it felt from the dubstep backing. It could of used more in the backing as well.

How much is going on in this is just.... Amazing, I came looking for this piece on NG, From the youtube Version just to download it. I don't know how to describe it, but I love it. It's simple as that.

I can't remember the difference between this and the original version, but I really generally enjoyed this piece! I just didn't really like how heavy the "Cymbals" or whatnot at the end of each line were louder than the main bit itself, and the new part that came in at 0:38 or whatever realllllly didn't sound like it belong their, it should of just came in at the beginning in my opinion. Really good job though!

ZLEAP responds:

Yeah, I can easily agree with the instrumentation being off. I just needed a sound to make in order to write it. I see a much smoother version being released in the near future.

I can't even tell when it restarts! Really heavy this time, with the consistent Humming in the background. The Piano sounds really added the mood to this piece. I can't wait for a full song of this, maybe without "Loopiness", and with some other pieces of sound in the track.

ZLEAP responds:

It most certainly will have other sounds when I'm done. I'm trying to go for a more minimal piece of music though. Less bells and whistles, more mood.

I HATE Hip Hop, I love this. Great Bass and "Up keeping" the beat.

The Heavy Nature of this song REALLY suited it especially of the vibe you get, while listening, and the "Bouncing" sound's at the end of each "Line" changed in part's to keep it from getting old and repetitive! At 3:05'ish the Melody being played is just a wonder to my ear's! Theres too much for me to comprehend thats going on in this, and the sampled bit's of drum's for the background was amazing! The "Guitar" Like sound that kept getting slammed repeatedly was great for the big heavy part's of the song! Great ending too, with the little bit's of "Breathing" really made me think "It" was alive!
What I have to criticize is... Nothing? I guess so! Simply amazing! 5/5

ZLEAP responds:

I'm glad this one left its mark upon you.

It's still among my favorites as far as my own work goes. It conjures up old feelings and mindsets. And to me, this track is very much alive. It is one of many vessels I use to house psychosis, loneliness and desperation.

The little subtle sound's in the background were great for this song, Especially 'dem "Wo-ha-ha-ha-ha-ha-ha-ha-ha-ha's" that kept resounding in the background, the constant up keeped beat of this song really added a nice touch to it as well, the little bit's of Misc. sound's in the background were great as well, However, the song sounded very synthetic, this being a personal opinion, you could have used some sampled bits of real sound, and it would have been perfect! The melody that came in at 2:25, didn't seem to land in at the right moment with the beat ongoing through out the whole song, a little bit of variation would have also made this a lot better too, other than that, Amazing Job!

ZLEAP responds:

Thanks.

I'm currently working on getting more organic sounds in my work. It really fucks with my writing process but the change is necessary. I'm waiting to find the balance.

This is definitely not your best work.
BUT, considering all your lost file's it's easy to say that you put effort into what you made.
This still deserve's a nice rating considering what you had to work with.
Now onto the song, there was not a lot to it, especially the background, and it was very generic.
Just get your file's back and continue to make good music!

Favourite, of course!

That sinister feeling you deliver everytime!
You aren't hardcore heavy metal! (I can actually stand listening to this!)
I love it, with dat beat ya be deliver'ing all up on Nergwounds!
Also love that touch in the description! ( :3, in a song like this?! )
5/5!

Lich responds:

Haha thanks :)

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